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Hi Carlo, i'm an undergraduated poosilhphy student from Me9xico city, and I concentrate in phenomenology and logic, therefore, It was a matter of time to find your Blog and became interested on your work. I know you aim here at a broader audience, but I can consider myself not an specialist, nor a diletant, so I would try to give you some in the middle feedback .The most relevant thing I found on a first lecture, is that you treat a lot of subjects. I've some knowledge on this period of history of poosilhphy, but, still, I feel an overwhelming use of concepts, in the sense that I fail to relate them precisely one to another. For example, the relation between psychology, logic, poosilhphy and the project of poosilhphy as science. I can guess what is the relation, for I've some knowledge on the subject, but, trying to limit myself to your text, that relation seems rather unclear. Maybe It will be nice if you can make more explicit those implicit relations on the text.On the other hand, I think that is unnecesary to expose all the historical relevant relations of Brentano, like if you were trying to convince someone of his relevance. I think this is valid for a broad and an engeren audience. You can save space by eliminating all that and better focusing on the reasons of poosilhphy been directed to psychology or logic. It would be good too an emphasis on what makes your project different from the traditional approach, because I get lost with all the subjects you treat parallelin the text: the relevance of Brentano and all the concepts. What I'm tryng to say is that you have too much richnessonyour text, and that it would be nice if you focuse more on one or two subjects only.Grfcsse aus Mexico, Jethro.
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lieber Alex, herzlichen Glückwunsch! Freue mich sehr darüber, daß Du in diesem Forum einige Deiner Bilder einer breiteren Öffentlichkeit näherbringen kannst. Aus Deinen Werken spricht das Gefühl Deines Herzens und immer ist zu erkennen, daß die Freude am Malen eines Deiner Werkzeuge ist. Ich wünsche Dir weiterhin viel Erfolg in Deinem Tun BoKi
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